Hi, I wanted to note a couple typos I see in the Father Fly PDF. In the stat block, one of the special abilities says to gain Bash, but the attack is called Crush. (Maybe this should be Swat since one of the fatalities seems to do that?) Fatality #5 "hurds" should be hurls. Maronne Encounter Table #3 - "The Numberless pulls a quick knife" - might be better if rephrased (what is a quick knife?) 1 - Market District - This section is missing text. "Stalls and small shops help a steady flow of shoppers. Whistles, and calls to check out what’s new. “Watermelons Freshly In!” sign hangs over large barges." -> Stalls and small shops help a steady flow of shoppers. Vendors whistle and call to passersby to check out what’s new. A “Watermelons Freshly In!” sign hangs over large barges. 4 - Barbershop "P Dwellers towards" - Points Dwellers towards The Numberless description - "Wrapped in cloak and black shear around their heads," - could be clearer. It is not clear to me if the adventure (and Marrone / the world) ends when The Melting begins or if there is a final chance to confront Father Fly post rebirth after the Melting begins? On one hand I'm not sure why there are post rebirth attacks and fatalities if the adventure ends before Father Fly can attack but on the other hand I don't quite understand how Father Fly might be attacked post rebirth (time slows, gotta dive into the eye of a teleporting being?)

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