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I just checked the newest .pdf of the core rulebook and am hoping there will be some editing/revision done before it's actually printed. Here are a few things I noticed. I'm sure there are more, but these are what I saw just perusing the book. In the credits section one of the influences is listed as Secrets of Mana. The actual title of the game is Secret of Mana (the first word is not plural). In the Witch class (on page 91), the Hexblade is still listed as a possible job, despite being removed at one point. In the Gunslinger class (page 23) the Limit Mastery "The Final Round" mentions something about Trick Shot. That does not exist among the class features, perks, or in any of the job-specific perks. The rules for multi-classing should be explained in a little more detail. As it stands, there is just a short example that players would have to extrapolate from (in other words, the rules are too vague). Aside from these things, there are a few grammatical errors I noticed. So, hopefully, people will go over this with a "fine-toothed comb" and correct as many mistakes as possible. Beyond all of that, I definitely enjoy how everything is looking. The artwork is amazing, the font style is great, and the rules overall are very simple. It seems like it will be a fun experience when I can get it to the table.

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