James Bell
CREATOR
4 days ago

Project Update: Storypath Ultra [Draft Manuscript Preview 4]

Hello Jadebearers,

I've got the next draft chapter for backers to download today - plus a bonus Appendix!

  • Chapter Four: Storypath Ultra System - designed to enable action-oriented gameplay, where each action drives the story forward in three main areas - action-adventure, investigation, and influence.
  • Appendix II: A listing of Tricks available to the characters of Jadestorm.

So, jumping a little out of order there for a moment, but it seemed to work well together.

A reminder that this is the draft version of the manuscript, and still needs a few rounds of editing and dvelopment, so you may notice some terms that are different from one chapter to the next, but this will all be cleared up when the final text is laid out in the book.

In fact, you can help guide the team through the next stages of development by providing feedback on these manuscript previews! The Onyx Path team has set up a special Feedback Form just for campaign backers for this very purpose: <Jadestorm Feedback Form>



You can use this FEEDBACK FORM to share your thoughts directly with the Jadestorm creative team to help guide them through the next rounds of development and editing.


DRAFT MANUSCRIPT PREVIEWS - BACKERS ONLY

Remember, thanks to BackerKit sorcery, these download links are visible to Backers only - you must be logged in and reading this on the website to have access to the manuscript preview links. So, if you're reading this via e-mail, click that "Reply to this Update" or "Learn More" button on the bottom and I'll see you below the Jadestorm title logo.

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