As always, the weekend was long but never long enough. And yet I was excited to get past it because we've got another big section of the manuscript today.
Chapter Six is all about the World of Eos, so let me share Matthew's rough draft map once again. I'll remind you that this is a rough draft for purposes of understanding some of the political geography and isn't yet finalized...
Much like our map, this is the latest, approved draft manuscript for Jadestorm, but not the final version. It still needs a few rounds of editing and development, and we're sharing it with you early because you can help make it the game you want!
Draft Manuscript Previews
Over the course of these 4 weeks, backers will receive the entire current draft manuscript for Jadestorm, but it's not going to come to you all in one go. The previews will come out in jade-sized installments throughout the campaign. This helps me seem interesting over the next 28 days, but it's more about guiding the conversation and helping steer feedback for the developers.
Because they want your feedback! These manuscript previews are of the current draft manuscript – the document in its latest, approved form. This may not be the final form - it hasn't been edited yet, and there will be further rounds of development - but you can consider it about 75% finished, so keep that in mind.
In fact, you can help guide the team through the next stages of development by providing feedback on these manuscript previews! The Onyx Path team has set up a special Feedback Form just for campaign backers for this very purpose: <Jadestorm Feedback Form>
Remember, thanks to BackerKit sorcery, these download links are visible to Backers only - you must be logged in and reading this on the website to have access to the manuscript preview links. So, if you're reading this via e-mail, click that "Reply to this Update" or "Learn More" button on the bottom and I'll see you below the Jadestorm title logo.
